Once I figured out what they were doing mechanically (rebranding/hacking their own game) then it was pretty straightforward. This is just personal preference, but when investing in a game I like to know about the gameplay as well as the fluff/theme. It just surprised me how far down their description I had to read before I waded out of the worldbuilding and into the actual game.

Though it seems pretty obvious they’re relying on their world-building to do the heavy lifting.